The Diamond Sentences




                The Diamond Sentences

A city of greeneries surrounded with full of loving people across the holy river Thamirabarni. A couple lived and they are well known to social services. They had a child named Naveen. He was so naughty and lovable. His mother had a trouble with him on feeding food. While feeding, the mother would say, “Look at the crow and buffalo and how it shouts”. Sometimes his mother got tired while feeding as he would run.

                 
                                                         

Mother murmured, “Rama, what a naughty child you gave me?” and he was number one in naughtiness. And the mother said “Rama, please help me?”

When he went outside with his mother, he tortured his mother to buy a chocolate and when she says no, he would lie down in front of the shop and he would not come. His mother said, “Rama, you have given a child as devil”. Whenever she said “If you don’t stop this I would complain to your father, Naveen reacted immediately, “Go mummy and complain. Unfortunately, at times he got angry and beat in his mouth with the words “Will you say?” but Naveen loved his mother.
                                
                                                           

When he returned from school, he would not do his homework and his mother had to repeat many times, “Do your homework?” But in a fraction of second he would go to the ground to play football and by calling his name she would lose all her strength and she would say, “When will he grow?”

One afternoon, he and his friends decided to scare their classmates. So they cooked up some stories and made pranks. “Hey students look there is a ghost beside me and look there is some unwanted smell coming and we are going to die”. When teachers entered, Naveen and his friends pretended as they have not done this.

One evening Naveen’s mother would think “what was the skill hidden within him? When he was doing his homework, she noticed that he was good at writing stories. But all the teachers complained that he was too naughty and they said “Please look after him”.

                                                                 Back to school and happy time. Teacher and kid. Teacher helping kids with their homework in classroom at school. School and kid concept

The school announced Annual Day competition and Naveen voluntarily participated in “Creative Writing”. When he returned, his mother met with an accident and she lost her legs. In the hospital, she asked him to open the birthday gift at home and he ran for home and opened and found a leaf made like a smile emoji. The leaf had the sentences as

UNITY GIVES SMILE
WHOLE HEARTED HELPING IMPROVES YOU,
ACHIEVEMENTS are LIKE LESSONS
AND HAPPINESS IS IN YOUR HEART
             
                                  -   The diamond sentences”

With this motivation he attended the competition and his teacher told his father the he had won the first prize. The message was passed to his mother and she decided to come with  him in a wheel chair.


On seeing that the school principal asked her mother to award her son as the “Best Creative Writer”, the whole audience appreciated. When he was asked to speak, he said “I have written on the topic of diamond sentences and like all naughty boys I have some talent. Please give some motivation to them. They will also become great leaders and this award is dedicated to my mother. And he promised his mother that he will not be naughty hereafter.

After a few years, another challenge was accepted by him in college to participate in the All India Creative Writing Competition. He was waiting for the results.


            
                            What was the opinion of the results?
                                                    
                                                      And
     
                                 What memory and change made by this story in your life?

Comments

  1. Super Naveen...

    Better use some strange names for characters...

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    1. Tq for the suggestion. I will make changes on upcoming stories

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  2. Good story..🙂 Keep on posting..

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  3. Boring story waste of time 🤣🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤬💩💩💩💩

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  4. 💩🤯🤯🤮💩👎👎🖕🖕🖕🖕

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  5. Super da awesome 😊😊😊😊

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  6. Good thinking . Keep writing stories.

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  7. Superb. Keep it up..My heart felt wishes

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  8. Kudos Naveen. Moral is excellent. Heart touching. Best wishes. Keep writing bro.

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